Good stuff happens in August, but August isn't a good month.
Reasons?
- It's hot.
- It's long.
August drags by. Shorter months follow the ones with 31 days. Exceptions: August and January. January has a good excuse. It's the reset month, and shorty-little-February makes up for it anyway. August is long just because.
So why do we have August (other than 'cause Cœsar Augustus put it there)? Good things do happen in August, but I think the reason it's there is so that September can be well appreciated. When Julius and Augustus bumped the seventh month out of its spot, I think it got a blessing-in-disguise.
Whether you like warm or cold weather, September is happy to accommodate you. September hosts "Indian Summer," and the Autumnal Equinox. By definition, September is where hot meets cold.
On top of that, September is gorgeous. The days get shorter, the bugs either die or hide, the scenery ignites with a fire that cools instead of burns. But it still makes things satisfyingly crisp: crisp apples are eaten, crisp air is no longer a struggle to inhale, crisp leaves are stepped upon, often for their crisp sound.
To quote Regina Spektor (in 'Time is All Around'):
Leaves become most beautiful when there about to die,
When they're about to fall from trees,
When they're about to dry
Up.
That happens in September.
Bad stuff happens in September. Still:
September is a good month.
I loved the style you have in your writing! The first line caught my eye because I agree with you wholeheartedly! I don't like August at all, and you're opinion was very persuasive with the examples you gave. Great job
ReplyDeleteThanks!
ReplyDeleteI was actually nervous about using this for my Community Writing piece. I wasn't sure it fit. So your feedback was reassuring.
I really loved this piece. It has so much style, and it feels like a poem. I don't know how you know all that stuff about the month of September, but this piece really gives September an extra sparkle, and it gave me warm-fuzzies inside when I read it. :) I don't really know who you could send this to (we do have to actually send these to someone), but I liked it. It is persuasive, too, although in a strange way... You gave good reasons for your argument.
ReplyDeleteI wrote this more along the lines of a Facebook note than a letter. I posted it on a blog.
ReplyDeleteAnd as for how I know so much about September... I have a lot of useless facts in my head. I try to find excuses to use them.
If you're using this for community writing, just make sure to specify in your reflection who the intended audience is, and how they might access it. It looks like you have that in mind (based on your last comment) and that sounds perfect...just remind me in your reflection. I'd also be interested in how friends/family/others responded to it, so include that in your reflection too.
ReplyDeleteGreat writing!