Wednesday, September 29, 2010

Our Founding Fathers

Signing the document meant death. All 56 men – most of who were wealthy and had nothing to gain by signing the document -- knew they were putting their lives, fortune, property, and families’ welfare on the line. But yet, they signed their names, confidently, creating the most influential and meaningful document in U.S. history: The Declaration of Independence. After signing their names on July 4, 1776, these men experienced hardships that are seldom heard of for a cause that they knew to be right; they displayed greatness.
I once read an article by Rush Limbaugh Jr. (the father of the famous talk show host) about the founders of America and everything they gave up for America. They loved the country and, to them, signing their names on that piece of paper was a binding contract, a promise that they would not break, and it did not matter how tough life treated them. I used some information from his article in my next paragraph.
A delegate from New Jersey, Abraham Clark, had two sons fighting for America. The two young men were captured by the British to be taken to a British Prison in the New York Harbor. It was known as the “hell ship” because that is where 11,000 captives would die during the duration of the war. Because the soldiers knew the two boy’s father signed the document, they were treated worse than their fellow American prisoners. They were given no food, and were on the verge of death. Abraham Clark was brought onto the ship after he found out where his sons were, and was given an option. He could have his sons back, alive, if he would deny The Declaration of Independence and if he would hail the British King and Parliament; if not, his sons would die. With his sons on death’s bead, Clark boldly whispered the word that would pierce the spine of the soldier, and every American who would hear it afterward: “No.”
Rush Limbaugh Jr. summed up his article with a paragraph depicting the honor of the signers: “Of those 56 who signed the Declaration of Independence, nine died of wounds or hardships during the war. Five were captured and imprisoned, in each case with brutal treatment. Several lost wives, sons or entire families. One lost his 13 children. Two wives were brutally treated. All were at one time or another the victims of manhunts and driven from their homes. Twelve signers had their homes completely burned. Seventeen lost everything they owned. Yet not one defected or went back on his pledged word. Their honor, and the nation they sacrificed so much to create is still intact.”
The nation we live in is the best nation on earth, but we would not have it if not for 56 men who signed a document of freedom for multiple generations afterward to feast on; 56 men who lost lives, family, and property because they would not break their word of honor; 56 men exhibiting greatness.

6 comments:

  1. Wow, Erin. I was blown away with a few sentences in your introduction. "Signing the document meant death. All 56 men – most of who were wealthy and had nothing to gain by signing the document -- knew they were putting their lives, fortune, property, and families’ welfare on the line. But yet, they signed their names, confidently, creating the most influential and meaningful document in U.S. history: The Declaration of Independence." I particularly like the first and last sentence in the section that I quoted above.

    Wow. I don't know what to say. I like how you laid out the consequences that the signers of the Declaration had to pay, etc. The whole story was great. Thank you for sharing! :)

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  2. Wwwhhhooooaaaa! That was so good! I can't even describe to you how much I loved it. I was totally drawn in to every word you said! I have no advice because it's already awesome!

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  3. Man, I really loved this blog. It definitely inspired me. That is so interesting that he would sacrifice his own sons. We all hope to be like that man in the face of our trials and stick to our guns.

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  4. Wow! You really do know a lot about our founding fathers. How did you get all that detail? This is my favorite piece that you have done so far.

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  5. I feel that too often we forget who the other less-famous signers were, despite the fact that they went through just as much hardship as any of the others.

    I have read about soldiers on the "hell ship." If the historical fiction I read based on William Clark's (of Lewis and Clark fame) family is true, one of his older brothers died of smallpox on the ship.

    Your piece packed a rhetorical punch. Your selection of bold, powerful words to convey your meaning was very well done.

    My only suggestion, and this goes for all of us, is to break up the block of text with a full line between paragraphs. I do it and I love it! And you can use it to unique literary effect.

    Nevertheless, excellent work!

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  6. I love your very specific example of greatness. I also like how the example of the Constitution reflects a group effort and how many sacrifices were made for something that has affected every American and every citizen of any country that has adopted a constitution similar or based off of ours. I can sense the patriotism in your paper and it is refreshing in what seems to be an era of party politics.

    Very nice entry.

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